Raindbows end

Yesterday the 20th of november team 5 went to rainbows end. When we got to rainbows end we all lined up and got our bands then we had to show that we had a wristband on our wrist for us to go in.

Then when we went in me and my group and my teacher took off and went to the rides. The people in my group were Founa, John T, Kevin, George, isaiah, Sione T and me and my teacher was mrs moala.

The first ride my friends went on was the fair fall. when it was there tarn they got on the fair fall seats and went up. Then 4 seconds later they dropped and they said that the could not breathe.

The second ride was the gold mind and for the gold mind we went around the track went fast then near the end the stopped and smoked their heads. When we went we were screaming then we stopped but lucky we did not hit our heads.

The thread ride was the invader that it spines and goes so high that it was scary. And for the seats this thing holds your back up so you don't fall backwards.

The fourth ride was the roller coaster it was not scary when you left the place then when you went down it was scary then I fainted then we stopped and I was diesey.

For the fifth ride it was the log when we jumped in we almost tripped and fell in the water then when we went in there were fires and elves then drop and got wet.

For the second to last ride we went on the bumper cars and a crashed everyone then we left because one of the cars flipped because a banged into it to fast.

For the last ride we did driving school it is a little driving school test and It said obey by the rolls and I did not. Then we had to leave and then on the way out we had to what tall the other buss came back from dropping of the other kids. Then it came and then we left and me and my friends fall asleep.

Task deception: yesterday we went to rainbows end and we had lots of fun.

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One night out in the pacific Ocean, there was a huge storm. The captain said pull the
rops men, hoist the sail tern the boat camon men hurry.  II captain. you heard him men.
10 scenes later Ice bearge the captain said. Before you knew it smach they crashed into
the iceberg Never to be seen again.

But from now on when ships tray to pass the boundary they will be approached by the
hefty pirates of the deep.

Narrative writing plan

This week we done a plan for our writing this is what I did.

TOY SHOP

                                                        TOY SHOP PRODUCTION
                                                                 On sip sap avenue

This Term we done a production called Toy Shop on sip sap avenue. This morning we had the production at Pt England school.
The main characters were. Woody, GI joes, Bears, Octomas prime, pied piper, there's that girl of the last Jedi and the girl of toy story that looks after the sheep.

My 1 favourite part was when Woody / justest danced on stage with the song called GIT UP. My 2 favourite has to be the Transformers when Octomas prime danced with the other transformers. My 3 favourite was the pied piper because all he did was play the pipe.
So that was my Writing about the TOY SHOP ON SIP SAP AVENUE.

Number 28

On night far far in china was a thump ‘BOOM’. What was that the people said from there rooms what happened. A little boy said there was a big robot. look, he said. PEOPLE: What are we look at they said. KID: I swear I saw something you've gotta believe me. Dad runs out of his house. DAD: What happened. PEOPLE: What happened What happened well tell you what happened that son of yours told us a hole lot of lies lies I tell ya. DAD: Sorry everyone, my son has been a little dramatic these days. SON: But but. DAD: There's no buts now get to your room. SON: Dad you’ve got to believe me. DAD: Stop that nonsense now go to your room. SON: B. DAD: Go. His dad looks at him with an evil stare.

1 hour later. Well the boy was playing fortnite. The power switched off. He looked out his window and saw the robot. SON: I'm going to prove them right. So he set off.
ROBOT: ‘Crunch’ ‘Crunch’ ‘Crunch’ As the robot eat the power lines.
Well eating the power lines we evolved from normal power to exstream power. ROBOT: I've got more power that ever ha ha ha. Then the robot took to the streets destroying houses and everything in its path. PEOPLE: aaaaaaaaa, run as the people of China are running from the robot. 1 minute later. The boy heard so he rushed to the street. There were houses on fire people dead and his dad in the robots hand. SON: Dad im coming.
As the boy was running the robot jumped really high with his jet packs so the boy rushed home a grabbed his motorbike and followed his dad. For hours and hours he was following the robot to the junkyard. Then saw his dad tied up to a car. SON: Dad over here DAD: Son help me get out of here. Know let's go home.

Stay chewend for Number 2

Why are trees impotent

WHY ARE TREES IMPORTANT

Introduction
Because if all the trees are gone there will be no Oxygen then everyone and everything around the world will die. The world might be known more.  Then the world will be like all the other planets in the galaxy

Idea 1
Trees are important because it gives us oxygen to survive on earth. if know trees then this Earth will be like all the rest no oxygen. Then there will be no creachears just land and sun and night.

Idea 2
Trees are vital. As the biggest plants on the Earth, they give us oxygen, store carbon, stabilise the soil and give life to the world's population.They also provide us with food plants and even creacears it even provides us with air that is flowing 0.1 seconds everyday. It is like when your brain sends messages around your body every second.

Idea 3
Trees give air, and it makes pollution from the environment. They improve water quality, prevent water pollution, their root system reduce storm waters that make a tsunami. and help animals to survive on Earth. No Oxygen no nothing.

Idea 4

Air, Water, Energy, and Light made life possible on earth.

No Air, Water, Energy, and Light Then life will not be possible

Conclusion

Because it gives you air and water to survive.

Kids should Get More Sleep So They Are Not Tired In The Morning For School.

For writing this week i'm talking about kids should get more sleep.
Kids should Get More Sleep So They Are Not Tired In The Morning For School.
Children who seem excessively sleepy during the day are more likely to have problems with learning and their actions. Kids that get more sleep can work better than the kids that don't get as much sleep as others. Children who don’t get enough sleep have a higher risk for many health and problems like anger, not listening, and hurting others.

My mum and dad give me a time to go to bed because they are good parents, my time is normally 8:30 / 9:00 o'clock so i’m not tired the next day for school. If you don’t get enough sleep the teacher could say something important, and your either asleep or dreaming about something else and not listening to what the teacher has to say.

Scientists.

Scientists are people that gather DNA and sample it to see what it is. Like your shoes it has got your DNA so like when they get your shoe they gather DNA to see who it belongs to. Your feet, your skin,your eyes every part of your body has DNA in it even you clothes.

shorter school day agree or dissagree.

      (This week we done should the school day should start later and end eairly) I agree and someother                           people dissagreed. read my persuasion map to fined out why I agreed.

Wordle

This is my cloud and it has every thing to do with the

word persuasive Commercial Speech Make Letter Advertisement Article

Review Poster Something

PERSUASIVE WRITING

This term for writing we are talking about if Technology should be allowed
for year 7 / 8 in school.

Favourite Places

Favourite Places
Subheading Bucklands Beach is very fun.
Bucklands Beach is one of my Favourite Places to go. The water in nice when the sun shines on it. The walk along the beach is like spending time with your family.
Because of the winds breeze that brushes your Skin.
Some Days we ride along Bucklens beach and it is amazing.

Subheading Rainbows End is one of my favourite places.
Rainbows End. Rainbows End is fun because every time we go on a ride that is tall my sister screams like a baby. The food at Rainbows End is Yum because I have probably never eaten it before. The games are fun because I like the gun game because I might go into the Navy.

Subheading GTA5 is my favourite game.
GTA5.
Is my favourite game because you have got cool cars the grafects are cool and the guns look real. When i'm bored I can go play GTA5 because it keeps me occupied.
Playing GTA5 online is fun because I can play with my cousin on the races and kill him.

Subheading Family is most important.
My last but not least is spending time with my family.
Me and my family go to the park some days.
We all sometimes play ball tiggy and sometimes play just normal tag.
My most favourite is spending time with my family wherever and whenever. Your parents are the first… everything. They brought you into this world and hopefully, guide your development into a person you are today.
(Warning: Family Comes First).

North America

North America.

It is huge it is the most popular place in the world.

Popular places in North America.
In North America there are some really popular places.

So let's start with the Brazil statue the Height is 30 meters (98 ft) and 38 meters and (125 ft). The Date it was built was October 12, 1931.
If I said how long has it been around if my conclusions are correct it has been around for 88 Years.

The statue of liberty.
The statue of liberty is a height of (305 ft) and it is a big green blue lady. It is located in North america in New York.
It was built in September 1875.

Disneyland is located in North America it is like the biggest place were most people go.
It was built in July 17, 1955, 63 years ago. Nearly 122,000,000 people go in about 56 seconds.
 
The Bridge is red it is  8,981 ft (2,737.4 m), about 1.7 mi ...
Construction start‎: ‎January 5, 1933
Construction end‎: ‎April 19, 1937.

FANBOYS

Compound Sentences

Using FANBOYS, combine the two simple sentences to make a compound
sentence.  Remember, you to make sure your new sentence makes sense.

1. Susie went to the pools AND Susie forgot her togs.

I made a word in between 2 sentences that make one hole sentence. Like
NOR, YET, AND, SO, FOR, BUT, OR those are the words that make a compound
sentences.

The World's Smallest Dragon

Into the Mist

Into the Mist


Write a story using the picture above as inspiration. Is this the beginning of the story or the end? Where is the girl going and why? Who is she? What is she walking toward? What is she leaving behind?

Be creative….is it real life or fantasy? Sad or funny? Scary or possibly true?

EXPOSITION:
Who:  A girl

Where: At a haunted place

When :Midnight

Hook: One night.


BEGIN WRITING HERE:

One night, when a little girl was trotting she saw a mysteries haunted ship. As she was trotting  towards the haunted ship a foggy mist appeared out of suther air. She was terrified like a cat she screamed like a car drifting. She sprinted like a lightning bolt in to the air never to be seen again as the years went by they had no trace of her.

2019 Tuesday 26th march.
People have now derived the hugh mysteries haunted ship and still have no idea were the little girl went. Scientist say she just like flew into the air.
HOW?
We will never now.

Polyfest 2019

when we went to polyfest thank you polyfest 2019.

Explanation template

Explanation template

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	Good role models.
Introduction Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.	Good role models are the types of people who encourage, motivate and respect other people.
Information 1st element Idea 1	To me being a good role model is someone who is positive all the way, confident with all things in life and someone who is bubbly and funny. Role models are people who are positive, being positive is a big thing in being a role model. Being a role model you have to be confident and face the challenges in life. You may not always be happy with the things you do but it’s best to be positive all the time. My mother is another role model of mine because she is very confident with the things she does, she is positive most of the time and always shows happiness towards others.
Information 2nd element Idea 2	Are you a good role model, do you show support, encourage & show respect to other people? In this explanation writing I am going to be explaining the reasons of what a good role model is & how a good role model sounds and acts.
Information 3rd element Idea 3	Good role models encourage others to never ever give up, they motivate people to strive and succeed, respect their peers and treat others the way they want to be treated. For example one of my role models is my mama. My mama has always encouraged and motivated me throughout my life at school. My mama has always encouraged me and told me that I should never give up with the things I do and achieve.
Information 4th element Idea 4	A role model is someone who is hard-working, mature and self-talkative. Most of my role models are very hard-working and powerful women. They are very strong and mature and have  believed in themselves all the way. My last two role models would have to be my teachers Mrs Ilaoa and Mrs Sio. The reasons why they are my two role models are because they are very hard-working. They work hard, never give up and always try to teach us new things at school. Our class can be a handful or more sometimes but my two role model teachers are always strong and push us until we succeed.
Conclusion There you have it - 4 reasons as to -why -that will help you -for you to try...	So now that you’ve read my story about “Role Models” are you strong, powerful and motivational enough to be a good role model? Everyone has the strength to be a role model. So use your strength and become a better role model then you already are.