Writing sentences

pump house trip

On Monday reading support went on a trip to the pump house. me and my friends were playing chatter box. And also we went past the city and over the harbour bridge.  when we got to the pump house, there were other schools there.  we had our own lunch then we went in the pump house. there was a house on the stage then we sat on the chairs then it started there was a teenage boy and his mum and dad. then there were pirates and they were having a pirate party then the pirate captain  shot his gun then fire works shot out of his gun. then all the pirates went to his house. when his mum and dad were at dinner then they were driving back from dinner. they went inside their house and there were pirates in there house. then we did a dance and then it was the end.

Writing about the creek

First of all we lined up and worked to the creek and there was a sine on the tree it sed no swimming. Next we were at the creek and it smalt like poo and it was sewage water. Later on There were daks and rubbish and there was a kage. When we at the creek I fault sad because there were rubbish and the pore dakes having to live in it.

All about me

Kia ora my name is Donte and I am a year 5. My teachers are Miss West and Mrs Buchanan. In my family I have 8 people. My goals are being good and being kind and helpful.