my narrative writing.

One hot morning three girls and one boy were eating ice cream.

Their names were Sandy, Harpa, Rose, and Josh . Then the

younger one sandy groped here ice cream on the flaw.

Sandy was so angry when she dropped her ice cream, that

she went inside and grabbed $5 off her mum's bed and,

when she got outside she asked her friends if they wanted to

come find the ice cream man and they said yes. And off

they went.

After walking for half an hour they finally saw the ice cream

truck but it was about to take off so the girls and the boy

harried and hurried but could not catch up. That was the last

stop.

Rose knew she would never get your ice cream so they walked home.

Meanwhile sandys mum was about to leave for work when she saw

her money was missing then she went outside and there was an ice
cream cone on the ground, and she knew straight away what
happened so she went straight to the shop and bought 3 boxes

of ice cream. 

When the girls and the boy got home sandys mum surprised them

with lots and lots of ice cream and they ate and ate and ate the

ice cream.

The end

By D o n t e   C o u p e r